国产男女猛烈无遮挡A片漫画,人妻饥渴偷公乱中文字幕,国产又色又爽又刺激在线播放,人人妻人人澡人人爽人人精品电影

網(wǎng)站地圖

首頁
關(guān)于我們
公司簡介
人才理念
加入我們
聯(lián)系我們
員工風(fēng)采
公司活動
讀者服務(wù)
糾錯平臺
正版驗證
渠道服務(wù)
當(dāng)當(dāng)網(wǎng)
京東
天貓
學(xué)科網(wǎng)
圖書展示
新概念英語成人版
新概念英語青少版
優(yōu)可英語(小學(xué))
優(yōu)可英語(初中)
優(yōu)可英語(高中)
優(yōu)可語文(小學(xué))
優(yōu)可語文(初中)
優(yōu)可語文(高中)
優(yōu)可直銷(初中)
優(yōu)可直銷(高中)
下載中心
新概念英語成人版
新概念英語青少版
優(yōu)可英語小學(xué)
優(yōu)可英語初中
優(yōu)可英語高中
優(yōu)可英語初中
優(yōu)可英語高中
新聞動態(tài)
新聞快報
學(xué)習(xí)天地

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫滿分作文萬能模板

2022-04-05
【題型分析與寫作方法】
題型解析:
讀后續(xù)寫是寫作的一種新題型,顧名思義就是我們在閱讀一篇還未寫完的文章之后,按照語段所給的開頭寫出兩個語段(約150詞),從而把這篇文章未寫完的部分補充完整,使之渾然一體。
讀后續(xù)寫不僅要求考生準確使用詞匯和語言框架,會合理潤色語言,更重要的是,它還要求考生能夠明白應(yīng)該如何整理續(xù)寫內(nèi)容,以使得其形成和前文統(tǒng)一連貫的、能夠表述完整信息的表達內(nèi)容。
應(yīng)該說,這種題型是閱讀理解和書面表達的溝通橋梁,它不僅考查了考生在閱讀文章的基礎(chǔ)上分析文章邏輯的能力,又考查了考生的創(chuàng)造力、想象力,以及運用準確豐富的語言進行表達的能力。
解題方法:
下面是讀后續(xù)寫類作文的寫作步驟:
1. 讀文
精讀文章,確定文章線索。每篇文章都有各自獨特的寫作思路,通過精讀文章,找到該篇文章的寫作線索,比如,是以時間為線索還是以空間為線索,這樣有利于考生“順藤摸瓜”完成續(xù)寫。確定文章體裁和主要內(nèi)容(話題)。注意文中的關(guān)鍵詞,也就是故事中的時間、地點、人物和事件等信息。
2. 審題
仔細審題,明確續(xù)寫要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有對此次短文續(xù)寫的具體要求,如詞數(shù)限制、續(xù)寫段落的首句提示,這樣考生才能做到“心中有數(shù)”。
3. 謀段
在讀文、審題的基礎(chǔ)上,先仔細閱讀續(xù)寫部分所給出的兩段段首文字,再構(gòu)思這兩段要寫的段落大意。根據(jù)原文情節(jié)確定好段落大意,找出每一段的寫作要點,然后再補充相關(guān)細節(jié)和常識,這兩段加起來要能寫出10到15個句子,以滿足續(xù)寫詞數(shù)的要求。
4. 初寫
擬寫草稿,修改錯詞病句。在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后,擬寫草稿。擬寫時,注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性及語言的豐富性,并通過句與句之間連接詞的正確使用,使上下文連貫。寫作時要注意,所用的人稱和時態(tài)要與原材料一致。
5. 定稿
完成初稿后,考生需先結(jié)合原材料中故事線索讀一讀自己續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容,既要確保所寫內(nèi)容沒有與原材料相矛盾的地方,又要保證內(nèi)容上前后連貫,語句通順;然后潤色續(xù)寫部分,可使用高分單詞或短語,運用各種從句、介詞短語結(jié)構(gòu)、非謂語動詞等高級表達,合理添加過渡詞;最后譽寫文字,這個過程考生務(wù)必做到“字跡工整、清晰”。
 
【萬能模板之讀后續(xù)寫“八步走”】
1. 情緒------情緒描寫。從原材料中體會作者相應(yīng)情緒,借助情緒的延續(xù),以此為銜接,續(xù)寫。
2. 細節(jié)-----進一步描述。
3. 轉(zhuǎn)折----個人的努力或者借助外界的力量,使事情發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折。
4. 轉(zhuǎn)機-----事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機,讓人抱有希望,心理能感到安慰。
5. 失望----問題仍然沒有解決或者又出現(xiàn)了新的問題。
6. 想法----面對沒有解決的問題或者新問題,突然有了想法或感觸。
7. 結(jié)局-----在想法或感觸的影響下,事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折/轉(zhuǎn)機。
8. 點題-----呼應(yīng)前文
備注: 這八步不是固定的,考生可以根據(jù)自己的想法打亂部分順序,也可以略寫個別環(huán)節(jié)。此步驟,可讓續(xù)寫有話可說,讓情節(jié)續(xù)寫跌宕起伏,前提是要讀懂原材料的中心,抓住文章脈絡(luò)。
 
【模板范文】
     前文提要:在我小的時候,我的家里有一個傳統(tǒng):在萬圣節(jié)進行雕刻南瓜比賽。我很想贏得比賽,于是每年都選擇一個很大的南瓜。有一年,我在雕刻南瓜的時候不小心把頭卡在了南瓜里。
I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head span dizzily as if the world swirled. At my wit's end, I felt a stab of fear. (“我”的情緒:慌張、無奈)“Don't panic! Papa, Papa, we need your help," Jason exclaimed. In time over came my father.(借助外界幫助)He embraced my neck and pulled back with strength while Jason pinned/pressed down the pumpkin.(一系列動作描寫)It didn't work, though. (問題未解決)“Why not tear the pumpkin directly?" suddenly rang out mother's voice. ( 新 想 法 ) In a split second, a creak broke out overhead, followed by a ray of light, which I seemingly hadn't seen for ages. (問題得到解決)But what did I see? My mother was filming all the way. (銜接句)
That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. To my surprise, soon my video was followed by a sea of likes, my mailbox flooded with similar stories. (銜接句)My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. A little embarrassed as I was, a wave of warmth welled up inside. (細節(jié)描寫之我的心情)Then a good idea flashed across my mind. (想法)“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online to choose the funniest? " I told Jason, jumping with joy.(做法,為結(jié)局做鋪墊)“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Competition. "Jason giggled. (Jason的反應(yīng),照應(yīng)開頭)
  
【萬能模板之高分素材】
【高分素材之單詞和短語】

1. 情緒描寫&2.細節(jié)描寫:

哭:howling(嚎哭), sob, weep, burst into tears, burst out crying. (one's eyes) brim with/be filled with tears

害怕: 

horror, frightened, scared, speechless, in(a)panic, in a cold sweat, be filled with terror, rooted to the spot, freeze, one's knees feel weak, (hands)sweat

高興、激動:(動詞)dance, jump/leap with joy, feel a surge of joy/ excitement, whistle, overcome with happiness/ delight /joy / excitement, (one's eyes) twinkle,(one's heart) beat/ pound wildly;(形容詞)delighted, overjoyed, excited, thrilled, wild with joy

傷心、痛苦: feel a surge of sadness, (sadness) surge within sb. , one's heart ache, overcome with sadness

生氣、憤怒:felt/ get angry/furious, feel a surge of anger/rage/fury, eyes blaze, storm out of/into/off, 

storm/say angrily, sth. makes sb. 's blood boil, sth. makes sb. extremely angry, clasp one's fists/teeth, sb. 's blood is up

3. 轉(zhuǎn)折:個人努力或借助外界
鼓起勇氣:pluck up/take/gather/summon up one's courage
毫不猶豫:without even thinking, without delay, without hesitation, without a second thought
4. 轉(zhuǎn)機:事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
似乎:as if, seemingly, appear, seem
欣慰:breath a sigh of relief, sigh with relief, to one's relief5.
5. 失望:但是問題還未解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題:
徒勞 : in vain, no use, without success
茫然 : at a loss, at sea, blankly, be lost in a fog
6. 想法:突然有了一個想法(一句話說明這個想法)
occur to, hit, strike, flash into one's mind, crowd in one's mind, dawn on
7. 結(jié)局:過段時間,事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折:
過了一段時間:not long, shortly afterwards, before long, for an instant/moment
令人驚訝的是 :to one's surprise, strangely enough
8.總結(jié):點題,呼應(yīng)前文
realize, echo, linger, whisper in one's mind, down deep in one's heart
 
【高分素材之句式】
★情緒描寫&細節(jié)描寫
哭:
1. A lump came to his throat.
2. Her eyes were red from crying.
3. Her eyes brimmed with tears.
4. Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.
害怕:
1. She was too frightened to tell her family what had happened.
2. His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.
3. Liza was so frightened that she couldn't make a sound.
4. I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my father's cloudy face.
5. My brain is blank. I just want to leave this horrible place.
高興、激動:
1. When she knew. . .she felt excited/thrilled.
2. When she knew. . .her eyes twinkled with excitement.
3. When she knew. . . her heart was pounding with wild joy.
4. When she knew. . .a wild excitement took hold of her.
5. Knowing...she felt a surge of excitement.
傷心、痛苦:
1. A sadness came over her.
2. Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
3. Numb with grief, she became speechless.
4. Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn't help crying bitterly.
5. Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.
生氣、憤怒:
1. Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.
2. He felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
3. Boiling with rage, he shook his fist at me.
4. Filled with fury, she was unable to utter a single word.
★轉(zhuǎn)折:個人努力或借助外界
鼓起勇氣:
1. He summoned up his courage and lodged a protest with his father.
2. I finally plucked up the courage to ask her for. .
毫不猶豫:
1. She could hardly wait to. . .
2. Hardly thinking/Without even thinking, he ran to. . .
★轉(zhuǎn)機:事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
1. It seemed as if/that someone was coming to save us.
2. Oftentimes our tears of remorse reveal a glimmer of hope.
3. A wave of relief flooded through me. . .
4. A wave of relief washed over him. . .1.ltsuddlyoccur1
★失望:但是問題還未解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題
1. But bad luck for me, I failed in my attempt to persuade her.
2. She closed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt to hold back the tears.
3. All our efforts were in vain.
4. She kept pacing, wondering what to do next.
5. With tears streaming down her face, she didn't know what to do next.
6. With tears streaming down her face, she was unsure of what to do next.
7. She was at a loss what to do.
8. He was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.
★想法:突然有了一個想法
1. It suddenly occurred to him that...
2. It hit me that I had a choice.
3. A thought struck her that. . .
4. It dawned that. . .
5. An idea occurred/came to me that
6. A ludicrous thought/idea flashed/came through Harry's mind.
★結(jié)局:過段時間,事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折
1. It didn't take long before. . .
2. It took some time before. . .
3. To my surprise enough, it turned out that...
★總結(jié):點題,呼應(yīng)前文
直到·······意識到
倒裝句:Not until+時間狀語+did sb. realize/notice that+從句
強調(diào)句:It was only+時間狀語+that sb. realized that+從句
還記得某人的話:
1. One's words echoed/rang out in one's ears.
2. One's words/voice/lingered/whispered in one's mind/head
3. One's head was still full of. . .
經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn)
1. What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson she taught me/I learned from her!

2. What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/

memorable/valuable experience I had!

3. Down deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had.

(素材來自網(wǎng)絡(luò),如有侵權(quán)請聯(lián)系刪除)
糾錯平臺
在你使用圖書時,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)了錯誤,可以通過微信-掃一掃功能,掃描左側(cè)二維碼進行反饋。
或者您也可以拔打010-82561173進行反饋更多問題請關(guān)注微信公眾號:知行鍵教育