英語讀后續(xù)寫4種主旨升華的萬能公式

一、主旨升華—助人型

在讀后續(xù)寫中傳達積極向上的正能量，是取得高分的要素之一。主人公受到別人的幫助或者幫助別人，是續(xù)寫的重要主題之一。運用以下兩種技巧，輕松寫出助人型的主旨升華句。

升華技巧一： from then on+行動

1. From then on, I would try my best to help sb. like sb. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.

從那時起，我會盡我最大的努力去幫助某人。只有這樣，將來才能有越來越多的人互相幫助。

【點評】本句表達積極幫助他人，并傳遞這種正能量屬于升華了文章，且使用倒裝句，故屬于高級加分亮點句。

2. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.

從那天起，每次我遇到需要幫助的人，我總是聯(lián)系他們，希望把墨西哥家庭給我的善意傳遞給我。

3. From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands. ”

從那時起，我就決定把“愛”傳遞給別人。正如一句諺語所說：“贈人玫瑰，手留余香。”

4. From then on , Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way, could more and more people help each ot從那時起，伯納德就決定去幫助那些需要幫助的人。只有這樣，將來才能有越來越多的人互相幫助。

升華技巧二： 感動+感悟

1.【2022年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫】

From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.

從這個項目中，我們也了解到了隊友的重要性。正如俗話說，一個人可以走得很遠，但一群人可以走得更遠。

2.【山東省濰坊市五縣市2022-2023學年高三10月統(tǒng)考英語試題】

From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.、

從這些經(jīng)驗中，我充分意識到作為一名醫(yī)生的責任和巨大的價值，因此，這激發(fā)了我繼續(xù)追求我的夢想。

3. I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.

我緊緊地握著紙袋，眼淚毫無控制地流了下來。正是愛讓這世界轉(zhuǎn)動，在我心里深深感受到了這一點。

 【點評】本句使用了獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)還有一個強調(diào)句型，另外運用了非限制性定語從句，這些不僅傳神地升華了主題，而且都是作文中的高分句型。

 

二、  主旨升華—成長型

在改變中成長，是讀后續(xù)寫的一個重要主題。而改變的表達，可以從以下幾個方面來進行升華。

升華技巧 一： 學習知識促成長

It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.

學習永遠為時不晚。每個人都有權(quán)利去接受更多的挑戰(zhàn)，做更多的嘗試。

【點評】individual 這里表示“個人,個體”;make more attempts“做更多嘗試”。

升華技巧 二： 發(fā)揮天賦促成長

Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.

事實上，每個人都有天賦。當你發(fā)現(xiàn)它的時候你要勇敢，也要努力。你能最終創(chuàng)造奇跡。

【點評】 possess“擁有”;create miracles 表示“創(chuàng)造奇跡”。

升華技巧 三： 追逐夢想促成長

1. 【2022年新高考I卷】That day, David got a special award for his courage. He was shining on the winner’s podium. David, with so many birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself!

那天，大衛(wèi)因為他的勇氣而獲得了一個特別獎。他在獲勝者的領獎臺上閃耀著光芒。大衛(wèi)有這么多出生問題，是我們所有人的英雄，最重要的是，是他自己的英雄！

2.It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.

追夢永遠不晚。只要你抓住機會，充分利用機會,你就有機會實現(xiàn)夢想。

3.As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我們敢于夢想,不被困難所阻擋,一切皆有可能。

【點評】 take full advantage of“充分利用”;realize your dreams 表示“實現(xiàn)夢想”。

升華技巧 四： 戰(zhàn)勝恐懼促成長

Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.

戰(zhàn)勝恐懼和實現(xiàn)目標,需要決心和樂觀。

升華技巧 五： 戰(zhàn)勝自卑促成長

1. 【2023屆江蘇省南京市第一中學高三一模試題】 In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them. Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.

在課堂上，我盡力抓住一切機會來提高自己。漸漸地，我開始和我的同學們進行正常的交談，并和他們相處得很好。生活中的一切都在變得越來越美好了。

2. I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now,I am proud of what I look like and much happier,because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.

我笑了,因為我最終意識到了自信的真正來源。現(xiàn)在，我為我的樣子感到驕傲,而且更快樂,因為我已經(jīng)意識到，決定你真正是誰的是你的個性。

【點評】 eventually表示“最后,終于”;personality表示“個性”。

升華技巧 六： 克服困難促成長

The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goa success) finally.

通往成功的路不會平坦,它會充滿挑戰(zhàn)和艱辛。我們要勇敢面對。只要不放棄希望并竭盡全力克服所有困難，

們最終會實現(xiàn)我們的目標。

【點評】 smooth 表示“平坦的"; 短語彰顯高級overcome all the difficulties；make every effort; as long as。

升華技巧 七： 戰(zhàn)勝消極促成長

Attitude is more important than facts for us. We can- not change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.

態(tài)度對我們來說比事實更重要。我們不能改變我們的過去;我們不能改變事實。然而,我們唯一能做的就是保持積極的態(tài)度。

【點評】 Attitude 表示“態(tài)度”;positive attitude 就是“積極的態(tài)度”。“積極”思維，最終讓我們成長改變,這種主題,是讀后續(xù)寫中比較常見的正能量的升華。

 

  三、主旨升華—脫困型

在往年高考真題中,曾經(jīng)考過: 拍攝北極熊遇險;父子騎馬迷路;騎車游玩遇狼脫險。讀后續(xù)寫常涉及到某些危險的情節(jié),我們就把這種類型的文章歸為“脫險”型，如：火災、森林遇到猛獸等。可以采取下列升華技巧。

升華技巧 一： 經(jīng)歷+感悟

1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.

那天是如此難忘，它將永遠留在我的記憶中。

2.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.

最后，我們走出了困住我們的森林。多么難忘的經(jīng)歷?。∈聦嵶C明，只要我們保持冷靜，就總有辦法擺脫困難。

升華技巧 二： 名言/句型+感悟

1.Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there is always someone to help us out and there is always hope waiting for us.

生活總會出乎意料地打擊我們，但總有人幫助我們,總有希望在等著我們。

3. There is no perfect life in the world. But we can change our fate. If we have confidence and work hard, we will absolutely be victorious and the most important thing is “Never give up!” I believe that nothing is impossible!

世界上沒有完美的人生。但是我們可以改變我們的命運。如果我們有信心并且勤奮努力，我們一定會勝利。最重要的是“永不放棄”。我相信沒有什么是不可能的！

4. Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.

直到那時，我才意識到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困難。

【點評】運用倒裝句和強調(diào)句強化“勇敢”，屬于點睛之筆。

5.We will meet various challenges in life, but never give up easily. Just as the famous saying goes, sunshine always comes after the rain.

人生中會碰到各種挑戰(zhàn)，但是不要輕易放棄。正如名言所說，風雨后總能見陽光。

 

四、  主旨升華—人與社會型

升華技巧 一： 感悟

1.【2022年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫】Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.

正如俗話說，一個人可以走得很遠，但一群人可以走得更遠。

2. Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me, there is none other than my mom Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can do sth. When I am older and have children my own,1hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.

每個人都有一個他們崇拜的榜樣。對我來說不是別人，正是我媽媽。如果我的生活中沒有她，我將不知道我是否能做某事。當我長大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望能成為像媽媽一樣偉大的母親。

升華技巧 二： 畫面定格

1. 【2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫】The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.

孩子們大聲說：“母親節(jié)快樂！”媽媽緊緊地擁抱著他們，一次又一次地吻著他們。

3. 【2021年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫】 In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.

那天晚上，爸爸回來了。我驕傲地拿出了我自己的錢，遞給了爸爸。

升華技巧 三： 修辭

1. 【2020年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫】 I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear.

我迅速拿出相機，拍下了這一罕見的場景——我們被一只北極熊搶劫了。

2. That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming

那份親情像一杯清茶,沁人心脾，溫暖人心。

升華技巧 四： 對話

1.【江蘇省南京市金陵中學2022-2023學年高三試題】Warmth ran through his body and tears welled up in his eyes, murmuring “you saw me barefoot and gave me shoes but how will I be able to give you feet?”

溫暖透過他的身體，淚水在他的眼睛里涌了出來，喃喃地說：“你看見我光著腳，給了我鞋子，但我怎么能讓你光腳呢？”

2.【江蘇省揚州中學2022-2023學年高三上學期試題】Lucy’s mom sensed her daughter’s worry and gave her a reassuring (令人寬慰的) pat on the back. “You’ll be great, dear. Just do your best. That’s all that matters.”

露西的媽媽感覺到了女兒的擔憂，拍拍她的背（令人寬慰的）。“你會很偉大的，親愛的。盡你最大的努力。這才是最重要的。”

升華技巧二:比喻

升華技巧 五： 收尾呼應

【開頭】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day

一天，在Arthur 上班的路上發(fā)生了一件有趣的事情。

【結(jié)尾】What a funny day!Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious .

多么有趣的一天啊!每當Arthur 想起這次歡樂的經(jīng)歷，他就忍不住笑個不停。
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